Agnishatdal Agrahayan 1426
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By your good old editor, few words about the works of my much cherished authors. So the critiques will be short and sweet!
Banshpati by Labanya: Opened a floodgate of nostalgia. These birds are so pretty!
Farce in the name of justice by saptarchi: The politicians who turn people against each other using one excuse or other should be sentenced to life. Right now, Bengalis should be ashamed because they are rioting! What a shame!
Berlin 2: Part 8 by Brieuc Martin Onraet: Thank you for sharing this piece of history Brieuc, you are one amazing story teller! Though this one ends with sadness still it was fascinating!
Games Ghost Play 2 by Raghunandan Kuppuswamy: Ha! It was a miracle that the narrator did not run away when the “Ghost” approached him and started talking!
Quid Novi by Troy David Loy: Meera is a great character in building and I am sure it will surpass all Troy’s previous characters!
Truth sticks by Dom Collucci: Wise and beautiful as always! Dom sure knows how to combine beauty with wisdom and give them an ethereal touch! Great piece!
Bitter Pill dose 25 by Bitter Pill: Religion: Human beings love to lynch each other at any excuse, we have to work on that tendency! Forgetting the labels used for satiating bloodlust!
Clippings by Freya Pickard: Freya is one amazing author! It is quite an achievement to work day in and day out in your BnB and write these fantastic pieces! Kudos!
The Drovers by Pat Ritters: Heart goes out to Harry! Working so hard at such a tender age and then asked by parents to move out of family dwellings! He certainly has lot on his plate!
Dirkball 8 by Robert Sherriff: another cute painting!
I believe that will be it for my critique as an editor, you will have to read the rest in Ezine. Of course there is truckloads of more works there!