Agnishatdal Jyeshtha 1427 May 2020
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Critique by SB
Agnishatdal Jyeshtha 1427, May 2020
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By your good old editor! Few words about the works of my much cherished authors. So the critiques will be honest, short and sweet!
Pronoy by Labanya: A sweet poem that filled the heart with nostalgia!
Farce in the name of justice by saptarchi: Well, speak truth in modern world and pay the price like Jesus Christ did, only you won’t be resurrected!
Fogline by Brieuc Martin Onraet 2: I just love this story! It is so much fun to read Brian’s works, he is one hell of a writer!
When Gold went on a trip by Raghunandan Kuppuswamy: Poor fellow, well, my guess is that guy is alive and boy, to have both your ears nicked by someone like that!
Fractal dawn by Troy David Loy: Sounds like Troy is extremely fond of Meera, let us see how she grows with time! She sounds like a fully positive character like Tempest and powerful too!
Relativity not reality… by Dom Collucci: Another gem from a great thinker. There is so much to learn if you observe!
Bitter Pill dose 31 by Bitter Pill: politics 6: If you look around and judge Indian politicians by their performance you too will start wondering who gives them those votes that gets them elected year after year!
Crows 1 by Brendan: I am so happy that Brendan joined us, his works are truly of another type, and I love that type! It makes one think after one has finished the piece.
The shearer by Pat Ritters 4: I really love the way Pat paints the pictures in mind, a clear picture of the world that he is writing about!
I believe that will be it for my critique as an editor, you will have to read the rest in Ezine. Of course there is truckloads of more works there!
