Agnishatdal Jyeshtha 1428 May 2021
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Critique by SB
Agnishatdal Jyeshtha 1428 May 2021 critique by SB
By your good old editor! Few simple words about the works of my much cherished authors! So the critiques will be honest, short and sweet.
Summer noon by Labanya- Marvelous, nostalgic poem, so many old memories came back while reading it.
Can I begin again by Scott Hastie: Scott’s poetries truly are full of light and fragrance, they fill up your heart with pure delight.
blackhole by saptarchi: Well, absolutely true, saffron brigade won’t stop till this country and its reputation is absolutely destroyed.
Fogline by Brieuc Martin Onraet 13: A new story, right now it is just warming up, as always very smooth and fun.
Vela Vela by Vasu Srinivasan translated by Raghunandan Kuppuswamy: How do these people do it! Riding on a bicycle for hours, going round and round! Its tragic that they earn so little.
Magna by Troy David Loy: Well Agni Bose is really evil! Hope Troy is not sharing his feelings towards me LOL!
Alienated… by Dom Collucci: How I will love to join him if he goes travelling through space, looking for other realities!
Bitter Pill dose 42 by Bitter Pill: Press 5: Raveesh Kumar is a very brave and seems honest too.
Speechless by Manju Balkrishna: heart-breaking!
Dream Angel by Pat Ritters 1: Very well written. Loved his father’s expression when he came to know that Pat was about to join police department. ha!
I believe that will be it for my critique as an editor, you will have to read the rest in Ezine. Of course there is truckloads of more works there!