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Agnijaat Ashar 1428 June 2021 critique by Labanya

Agnijaat Ashar 1428 June 2021
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Critique by Labanya

Agnijaat Ashar 1428 June 2021 critique by Labanya

Agnijaat Ashar begins with a beautiful sketch on Ganga’s descent to earth.

Indie Author Speaks: Good post, Sharmishtha referred a few free review sites.

FTQFS: A million dollar quote for envious people!

Techbabble: Very true, any professional should not claim that his/her referred product is as good as another if it is not! It will spread really bad word of mouth for his/her opinions.

India Now: Kingdom of fallen – She is right, the audacity and laziness of Kolkata garbage collectors is amazing! No wonder the city is full of disposed garbage everywhere! As for atrocities against Shudras it is common, but not in Bengal, and the Shudras should concentrate on getting what is government giving out to them “huge amount of quotas everywhere” instead of complaining about their horrible condition, if they start utilizing those “quotas” they will rise in society!

SOS: Is not it true! Yes! Nurture your own heart too!

Intriguing Tales: Some people really don’t get it, they chase their own death!

History of India: Interesting piece about entry of Aryans in India. These are the scriptures that make you grumble about old Indians, why did not they kept written records! Grr!

My Pen: of journalists 3: Indian mainstream media has shown that too many Indians are ready to sell anything and everything for money. That is a scary society to live in.

Fun and Frolic section:

cute pic for the section, another cute hedgehog! It was followed by a pretty painting of two sunflowers and a beautiful photograph of moon.

Prnic Poetry by Scott Hastie: Mr. Hastie’s poetry is really fabulous. I am becoming quite a fan of his amazing style.

Release from stasis by Graham Clingbine: The cover is elegant, the story sounds disturbing.

Pikatron December 2019 critique by Editor: Will have to get the newsletter from Troy or Agni.

Behind the scenes : Agreed. Sometimes the peek behind the scene absolutely destroys the cover!

Indian Raga Now:

Gyanendra Prasad Goswami- Never heard his name before, will have to check out on YouTube.

SPOTLIGHT ON- Cary Grant- Now that is one lady killer from head to toe.

Window to West – News of the world: I wonder if the young generation of Hollywood cares or simply is busy counting money churning out different stories from same stories that the older generation is still making quality movies.

Jyeshtha Shots: Four lovely shots, loved the squirrel.

Youtube channel: Already checked them all out.

Storytime: poetry from Patreon: beautiful message.

Gayatri Jayant: Another interesting festival.

Theme: lillies- Seven pretty paintings. I love these flowers. They show up after first healthy splash of rain in many gardens outside Kolkata.

The cartoon Mr Stick: Another dose of horrific reality.

In the end quite enjoyed the Ezine, and its colourful sketches/paintings especially they are refreshing and pretty!

That is it I guess! See you again next month, and thank you Agni/Sharmishtha for translating my works!

Yours sincerely,

By the way if you see any other Labanya in Sharmishtha’s social circle that will not be me. I don’t use my pen name [Labanya] in social media, use the real one.


A bookworm transformed into an addicted writer. I love to write and illustrate them myself. By love I mean love, no half-hearted relationship, a full-fledged, passionate love, I can’t pass two days in a stretch without writing/painting (cyber), just feel empty like lovers do when their lovers are away on a tour! Even though I am thoroughly enjoying self-publishing with amazon, but if you like my work and want to publish my works in your magazine, books or better if you want to publish a book of my works please make me very happy by contacting me. Or if you want to sell my works on commission basis only!! contact me, I will be quite relieved. Honestly writing and selling your own work is a very BORING combination. So you are more than welcome! Mail me, or go to- I have one too many blogs, so... just pick up the one you love best from here: (You will get the link to my remaining blogs there) or you can check out my ezines- monthly- And linkedin- [Invite me from your linkedin a/c] my email id and I am in goodreads and completelynovel too I guess I said enough about myself, right? You will forget if I stuff too much here, so if you are curious to know this humble creature just join me in my blogs :)

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