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Agnishatdal Shraban 1428 July 2021 critique by Labanya

Agnishatdal Shraban 1428 July 2021
Critique by Labanya

Agnishatdal Shraban 1428 July 2021 critique by Labanya

Hi friends, let us begin!

Shraban issue begins with another shot from Golconda fort, the tribute this month has been paid to Sarjoini Naidu and I discovered a lot of brand new things about her from this article. Actually I knew very little about her.

If you listen by Scott Hastie: So true, if you listen you will hear your guide guiding you in the right direction.

Ye reap…2 by saptarchi: Saptarchi is right again. They came to power howling against terrorism and corruption and turned the country into a terrorist country and mother of all corruptions. They are selling the ground under our feet to make their corporate buddies richer. Lynching innocents in the name of religion!

Fogline by Brieuc Martin Onraet 16: “ A cop is misdirecting traffic…” love these quips, another piece from Fogline very interesting one too! It was a touching piece.

The dawn of data abstraction by Vasu Srinivasan translated by Raghunathan Kuppuswamy: Well the man had the last laugh and the king had to return the fine. Good one.

Crawling by Troy David Loy: Interesting piece, a war between two super powerful beings has just begun! Rest will be shared next month.

Seek and ye shall be blind… by Dom Collucci: Beautiful.

Bitter Pill dose 45 by We are safe 2: BP raised a bunch of very good questions about our new rulers and the way they are ruling us, sending us to hell!

Gillu by Manju Balkrishna: Don’t know Hindi.

Dream Angel by Pat Ritters 1: Very well written and fascinating, I love these stories a lot, when a person shares his/her firsthand experiences about another culture, country, in this case about another era!


Happy birthday Raghu and Agnijaat and Agnishatdal. Also, Sharmishtha, May God bless you all with the very best in life!

Sfulingo and Agnidal 5 in Kindle: Will be reading them after finishing this book.

4 fantastic shots of flying birds were shared this month.

This month Linkedin Requests are worth checking out if you are a writer or artist.

Release from stasis by Graham Clingbine: Wonder if it is dark or light story.

My artwork stores: The details of Sharmishtha’s artwork stores. Already checked them out, the products are really good.

Star of the Month Gregory Peck- He was marvelous. Have watched more than half a dozen movies by him and loved him in all of them. There is a great photo of the star too.

Star of West: Nomadland: Sounds like a great movie.

Star of east: Pinguli art- fabulous artworks.

Youtubia-PBS Its ok to be smart- Love them.

Minutes Together: The story graveyard was creepy.

Loved the Bengali poem and the hindi poem both. Thank you for adding my work Shraban in your ezine Agni and translating it for me.

Kali- Fascinating story about Mother Goddess Kali! I have not read this one before.

TnW- Laugh- good suggestion!

Bhandananda- Hate-mongers are immensely powerful!

The sketches all through the ezine were pretty, very colourful and lovely.

That is it I guess! See you again next month, and thank you Agni/Sharmishtha for translating my works!

Yours sincerely,

By the way if you see any other Labanya in Sharmishtha’s social circle that will not be me. I don’t use my pen name [Labanya] in social media, use the real one.


A bookworm transformed into an addicted writer. I love to write and illustrate them myself. By love I mean love, no half-hearted relationship, a full-fledged, passionate love, I can’t pass two days in a stretch without writing/painting (cyber), just feel empty like lovers do when their lovers are away on a tour! Even though I am thoroughly enjoying self-publishing with amazon, but if you like my work and want to publish my works in your magazine, books or better if you want to publish a book of my works please make me very happy by contacting me. Or if you want to sell my works on commission basis only!! contact me, I will be quite relieved. Honestly writing and selling your own work is a very BORING combination. So you are more than welcome! Mail me, or go to- I have one too many blogs, so... just pick up the one you love best from here: (You will get the link to my remaining blogs there) or you can check out my ezines- monthly- And linkedin- [Invite me from your linkedin a/c] my email id and I am in goodreads and completelynovel too I guess I said enough about myself, right? You will forget if I stuff too much here, so if you are curious to know this humble creature just join me in my blogs :)

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